"In the second slide, I think you should expand more on what 'empire' magazine is as this is not clear. You could include other reason in which why you chose it, such as you think this is a colour scheme or layout which you might want to follow the lines of. In the their slide, if you were in need of some more practice pictures,try locations in which are varied, such as a busy town centre or a indoor personal area such as a home, so when you can look into the theme of your own magazine in which you will create, you can have options to look at of what you think will work best. In slide 4, you could talk about your own personal opinion of film, and why you like it so much. When talking about the colour scheme, you can so mention if it gives you an inspiration " says becky
Ben says "The practice pictures page looks a little unorganized, its well informative over all"
after I updated it I asked Megan for her opinion she said "Just had a look through, I like it, you've got some good information in there"
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