I have asked a few people I know what their opinions on magazines are? What they think of a regional magazine? What their favourite type of magazine is? and if they don't buy magazines, why they don't buy the magazines?
I have went and collected feedback on y front cover draft from people I know who are my age.The first sticky note reads "Good quality pictures, good face emotion, Like how the back ground is blurred" mainly all positive feed back the second sticky note read "Spelling mistakes, focus doesn't stand out, like the natural pose of the model and can tell it is aimed at the youth". This tells me I need to go back to check the spelling and try and make focus stand out more maybe i can change the size or the colour.
The first sticky note says "Good mix of photos like the colour of the headlines as they match color in photos" mainly positive and this tells me what I am doing correctly. "colours matching as looks odd" I am not quite sure as to what the reviewer is saying as some one else said the colours went well but this person is saying they don't match? the final note says "good range of pictures, good amount of info and good quality pictures" By having my contents page reviewed it has helped me see what other people think of it and has helped me see if and where i need to improve"
The double page spread notes read "spelling/punctuation" I am guessing this means I need to check my spelling and punctuation how ever it is a bit vague, "more pics and captive title" I can see that this person ants more pictures on the page and by doing so I may need to re do the layout a bit. The other note says "Maybe a mix of smaller paragraphs and start do new page should have a new capital. Not sure what is happening in the first photo? like the colours" I am not sure if I was able to explain clearly to the people taking notes that the pictures used are screen shots from the movie or maybe it isn't clear enough.